JLE#16: Week 3 Story, Miracle Man
Miracle Man
James continued his journey and amassed a large following throughout his long adventure. Of that following there were the fisherman who he
considered his most trusted allies. The men spread his teachings and did everything James asked, regardless of what the
outcome might have been. They had faith
in whatever he said. Upon entering a prosperous
city in the middle of The Great Desert, the holy men of the city were aware of
his arrival. They were not fond of the
miracles James and his following had been performing. James then became aware that one of his most
trusted associates would come to betray him.
He accepted that even though these men were trustworthy, none had the
divine will that he possessed. He decided
that he would flee the city and go north with the men he trusted the most. They escaped the great city and left the beautiful
oasis behind to ensure his safety. At this point in James’ journey, he had become
weak and did not want to live a life on the run.
When they arrived north, they settled on a mountain top which
had a natural path all the way to its peak.
There they would reside and those who needed blessings would come to him. Those who opposed him were never able to
capture him because of the strategic location they had established on a mountain
peak. Each time there was an attempt, a
divine interference would occur causing blizzards, avalanches, and anything
else to keep those that sought to do harm out of the area.
James spent the rest of his days writing about his journeys and recorded
his teachings to be passed down.
Author’s Note: I decided to go in a completely different
direction than what I had proposed in my notes.
I wrote about how Jesus heals a man possessed by spirits and then
continues to journey on into Jerusalem. Jesus
and his disciples are constantly being harassed by the Pharisees and high
priests because they do not believe him to be divine. Ultimately, one of Jesus’
followers betrays him and sells him out to local authorities in the Gospel of Mark.
He is then captured brutally beaten over
time and then crucified on the cross. I
decided to take a turn away from that part of the story and just focus on the
first part of his journey. I wrote them
escaping the betrayer and local authorities because I did not want my story to
go in that direction. Instead, I liked
the idea of a happy ending and wrote in the escape. James was never killed or crucified in my
story. I stayed in line with the
original plot with the man possessed by spirits and keeping the betrayer and
hostile priests/authorities. Other than that,
I kept getting different ideas as I was writing and decided to run with those.
Source: King James Bible; Gospel of Mark
What up, Jack. I almost wrote James there... That's interesting you chose the name James because James was one of Jesus' disciples. The beginning of the story could have gone in any direction for me because it was just a guy stepping off a boat. Once you included the term legion I knew what direction you were going in. Except I didn't because you wrote a Jesus story without the ending! Interesting direction. Personally I'm glad it ended the way it did in real life.
ReplyDeleteJL, awesome story man. I also used week three to read the Gospel of Mark and I like the direction you took this story of James. "Legion" is a pretty freaky movie if you're ever looking for something to watch. I picked up on what your reading was pretty quick and it just built up my anticipation to see what route you would take the life of James. It seems like most of us are twisting our tales to happy endings (myself included). I guess that just says we're a rather optimistic bunch! Write on!
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