JLE#45: Reading Notes for Zelinda and Monster, Part A
Reading Notes
Zelinda and the Monster
I enjoyed this story because it kept me on the edge of my seat throughout the tale. I was completely caught off guard that the monster was a man and required the consent of marriage from a woman to be turned back to normal. I think there is something in my new story I could write about that is similar to the monster turning into a man. I like twists like that in stories because usually it is not to be expected by the audience. I may even spend a little more time on describing the palace they entered. Possibly changing it to an underwater palace or somewhere else reclusive like up in the mountains.
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