JLE#32: Reading Notes for the Dragon, Part B
Reading Notes
I enjoyed this story because it was a little more action-packed than my favorite from part A. I think I can do a lot with this by adding more action. I decided to take a step away from my usual preference yesterday and went with more of a story rather than a battle. I am tempted to take out the Princess Tacibana all together, but I am still open to some options. I really enjoyed the story from part A more than any of the ones I read in part B. Specifically, I may try and rewrite my first storybook about susanoo and orochi.
Story source: Romance of Old Japan, Part I: Mythology and Legend by E. W. Champney and F. Champney (1917). The Labors of Yamato - The Dragon
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